Tuesday, October 9, 2012

Can't Get to 700 Words?

One of the main reasons I notice that students fall short on word count (especially when it's as small as 700) is that they have not supported their ideas with ACTUAL evidence or examples.

Here's the fix:  Do some research!

1.  Go here
2.  Sign in (username and password are both neistm)
3.  Click on "My Products Page"
3.  Type your topic (Santa Claus, Jersey Shore, humor, hoarding etc.) in the search box
4.  Click on "Full Text" right underneath the search box.
5.  Click the magnifying glass to search

Once you find your article, you can integrate what the author is saying into your own essay, showing that you aren't the only person with this idea.  You can also tear down people you disagree with.  In any case, adding actual research to your essay will beef it up and make it more credible.

For example, when I looked up "reality tv" I found this article:


Reality TV's Effect on Teens

Kolich, Heather NListen64. 8 (Apr 2011): 16.
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Abstract (summary)

Cheryl Dellasega, a professor at Pennsylvania State University, links the abundance of reality TV "mean girls" who benefit from bad behavior to a real-world rise in relational aggression (bullying) among teen and adolescent girls. Jon KraszewsM, assistant professor of broadcasting and film at Seton Hall University, thinks MTV's The Real World uses casting, editing, and production choices to construct a reality- and support a particular ideology - for its authence.

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